MORA"GIN the fallen paladin

[Gaby]

no im not aborigine i am related but im not ok

uh... what?

I dunno how i'm passing english they say i need to type slower and wright slower then ill actualy make better grammar.

that's some good advice, seeing as how most of your mistakes are run on sentences. >_>

 

[vanar]

...... now lets talk about you correcting my story ....... again
also once i have built my manor ill no longer be changeing towns my home will be my home

 

[Gaby]

...... now lets talk about you correcting my story ....... again

editing it now. I'll pm you when I'm done.

 

[vanar]

ok thanks for the help i shall call on the blessing of the blind queen to aid me in freeing you of your curse

 

[vanar]

now this may make you mad gab but im changeing my story a little im makeing it in chapters of the start an the finish so it will be in chapters an such

 

[vanar]

but i might make it in another thread becuase i need to edit my story an profile a little

 

[vanar]

so if all who have posted be so kind an delete the posts so i may get started

 

[Gaby]

pm me the profile before you post it.
guess my editing work was pointless. le sigh...
*throws document away*

 

[vanar]

hay i can still is the documents for impirerations

 

[vanar]

great news everyone mora'gin is nolonger an undead he saved a life of someone useing his own lifeforcee thus touched the good gods an he was placed in the well of wisdon in ithrandir an was turned into a human THUS all his holy power from 668 years ago wtich piled up inside him an now he is ascending into the form of a hholy being or angel for short

 

[vanar]

i GOt really bad news i have to make a new rp becuase of the set of races we have to choose from so now ill be makeing a new story an stuff also im gonna make a skin request

 

[fuzzypandaman1]

Aye good story bro.