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[Song] Maceo's Lament

Bartooliinii

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I've finally finished this 'lament' for Maceo.
The colored lyrics are what the Gods reply.
Enjoy!
(Also I stole Blarg's text dividers cause I couldn't find any good ones)




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They waited for him, in Haven in the shadow.

At the foot of the mountain, and view o'er the meadow.

Prayed to the Gods, for they knew the news of late.

Some Gods did answer, for they knew of his fate.


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Maceo, left Haven through the gates.

To Synnove devoted, what news of his fate?

Maceo!


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Salanna I summon you, from the flowering fields.

Have you news of Maceo? Did he win or did he yield?


I have not seen him, but in my heart I feel:


The coming of grief, a heartache instilled.

Pray not to me, for I feel my power wanes.

Pray to the Grey Lady, she without a name.


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Maceo, left Haven through the gates.

To Synnove devoted, what news of his fate?

Maceo!


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Jax, I summon you, from the market stalls

What news of Maceo? Is he alive or did he fall?


I know of his path, for I favor the bold.


His path is of peril, but he would not change his goal.

But my luck can't help him, so pray not to me.

Pray to the Grey Lady, she will set him free.


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Maceo, left Haven through the gates.

To Synnove devoted, what news of his fate?

Maceo!


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Korog I summon you, from deep within the mountain

We need our Maceo, our everflowing fountain.


I know of his actions, they resound in the stone


He is making history, but he stands all alone

For The Gods can't agree, to the path that he took


Pray to the Grey Lady, she knows where to look

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Maceo, left Haven through the gates.

To Synnove devoted, what news of his fate?

Maceo!


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Ignis I summon you, from the sunny blue above

Tell us of Maceo, your devoted, you're his love


He fights now so hard, and he fights near The Rift.


He battles with Rahas, making place for Godly shift.

But Crusade struck him down, My devout is no more.


Pray for the Grey Lady, to grand him passage through our door.

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Maceo, left Haven through the gates.

To Synnove devoted, what news of his fate?

Maceo!


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Oh Grey Lady, come from the darkest night.

We pray for Maceo, who was slain in Godly fight.

Take care of our hero, bravest of them all

Let him be seated with Ignis, he's our saint, please, hear our call.


The people of Haven, must ever Riftwards cry


Their voices of loss, must with the eagles fly

Maceo lies slain, for devotion, for his love


Let Synnove embrace him, in the sunny sky above.

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Maceo, left Haven through the gates.

To Synnove devoted, what news of his fate?

Maceo, left Haven through the gates.

To Synnove devoted, what news of his fate?

Maceo!


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Bartooliinii

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Oh wow, thanks for these reactions! I really was not sure what people would think. I was struggling with it for so long. Glad to hear!
 

Bartooliinii

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Thank you all for expressing how you feel about the song. It really made my day. It shot up to 50 views in one day, which is very good for my standards. I've decided to upload it to my main channel and link it there instead, so it may grow a bit more. The viewcount is at 0 at that one of course, but I know it'll have more potential to grow on my main account than on that side-account I usually upload these on.
 
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