Name: Gondarf ok cool
Nickname/Alias: Gondarf maybe gondy is what you mother called you, gondan, gon?
Age: Uknown why is it unknown? what makes it unknown? seems boring with just unknown
Gender: Male
Race: Unkown same as above, pick a race! adds culture and history
Height: 189cm
Weight: 7 stone
Hair: Brown/Blonde
Eyes: Golden/Brown
Skin: Slightly tanned
Identifying Marks: LARGE eyes why do you have LARGE eyes? whats so special about them? are they inhumanly large? or just above average large?
Appearance: Long hair, large eyes.
Strengths: Stealth,Strength,Acrobatics
Weaknesses and fears: Death,Bandits if you're an assassin/ninja then why are you scared of death? and bandits?
Religion and cults: Self religion what does that mean?
Profession: Ninja, Assassin,Gatherer,Healer waaaayyyyyy too many professions. makes you seem over-powered which isn't fun. work up to them by learning from people through RP.
Backstory:
Book 1
Chapter 1
My earliest memory is probably being beaten for stealing in the long lost town of Kantron. I was told that I was the son of a bandit who had many a bounty on her head. No-body knew her real name but referred to her as Macellarius meaning Slaughterer <- why did she earn that title? in the ancient dead language of Latin. In my old town we were not told not to steal, just not to get caught stealing. <- why did you need to steal? were you poor? where's your dad? your bandit mother? how were you raised? I didn't really like the art of theft so I resorted to the art of Acrobatics and soon became best in my acrobatics class.<- this is boring. where's the struggle and obstacles? just saying "i'm the best and that's that" is powergaming, uninteresting, and boring. My old town used to be the biggest supplier of theft tools and small weapons. Then the High kings came along and changed all that. They started to send us death threats to stop us making weapons and tools but after that failed, the came down on that town like meteorites to a source of gravity.<- why? what happened? what motives did they have? My town was smashed to the ground and then overrun with wild beasts and monsters. <- where did those come from? I fled away to safety using my superior acrobatics skill. <- no one should be "superior" at anything unless they prove it. proving it takes time and lots of RP. there's no growth or fun in "i'm the best there ever was." That is all that's happened and I have finally resorted to searching for Macellarius. <- Well that's a boring end. why are you searching for your bandit mom? what will she do for you? she might kill you!
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