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Music Help Requested

HogoShi_Kitsune

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HogoShi_Kitsune
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I don't know if anyone else here dabbles in music, but is there anyone available who could give this transition a listen? It doesn't sit right with me but I can't place my finger on what's actually wrong with it...

https://clyp.it/vtakrem3
I'm working on a mix for a convention and I've hit a bit of a bind....

Edit: If you're not familiar with it, clyp.it is a site for DJs who are looking for opinions or help on "clips" of music.
 

Electric

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electricwisekid
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I think this needs more bass, imo.
Typically for that I use a phat saw.

Just use one saw wave in an osc, put about 16 voices and detune heavily. Pitch down about an octave or two and there you have it. You probably already know the next part but cut the low lows and add a sub~
Gonna listen more to give thoughts on the transition
What DAW you use, boy?
 

Electric

professionally deranged
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electricwisekid
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Oh my god I’m an idiot hecking discard my advice
 

HogoShi_Kitsune

Lord of Altera
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HogoShi_Kitsune
HogoShi_Kitsune
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I think this needs more bass, imo.
Typically for that I use a phat saw.

Just use one saw wave in an osc, put about 16 voices and detune heavily. Pitch down about an octave or two and there you have it. You probably already know the next part but cut the low lows and add a sub~
Gonna listen more to give thoughts on the transition
What DAW you use, boy?
Oh my god I’m an idiot hecking discard my advice
Haha it's no worries. These are two different songs that I'm mixing together in Audacity because I don't have any better software.
 

Colonelgames

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Colonelgames
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At about 0:28, the transition sounds like it happens too quickly.

Perhaps you could add in a few of those higher pitched ascending notes (during 0:17-0:19) fading out during the transition?
 

HogoShi_Kitsune

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HogoShi_Kitsune
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D'oh! I forgot to say I figured it out. The issue was that Ison was in the wrong key. Once I adjusted the pitch, everything clicked together naturally.
 
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